Different Unlike Us : The Wedding Dress Caper

Another preview of Different Unlike Us

Different Unlike Us
“The Wedding Dress Caper”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2007 David Rasmussen

Page 1 (Page 1 of 4)
Panel 1
Vigilance pushes unconscious villain to one side, other hand holding newspaper as she stares at it.

Panel 2
Page one headline cover image of Alison in a wedding dress fighting a costumed villain.
Headline : RING HIS BELLS!

Panel 3
Rooftop shot of Ester (mask pulled above her head so you can see her face) as she stands out of sight on the rooftop staring at the newspaper (police below arrest villain she subdued).
Caption (pointing at Ester’s face) : “It takes awhile for her emotions to kick back in once she takes the mask off.”

Panel 4
Street level view of rooftops looking upwards.
Ester (off panel) : “What the (bleep)?!?”

Caption (pointing at rooftop Ester is on) : “Her emotions kicked back in.”

Different Unlike Us
“The Wedding Dress Caper”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2007 David Rasmussen

Page 2 (Page 2 of 4)
Panel 1 (top left of page)
Alison (sitting in restaurant booth at their favorite eatery from “Emotional” looking at newspaper).
She looks rather bored as she stares at the newspaper. (street clothes worn by all)
Alison : “And this is important because…”

Panel 2 (below panel 1 to middle of page (left side))
Sitting at the booth talking, Alison on one side and Ester/Savannah (human form) on the other.
Ester : “So you don’t deny it, do you.”

Alison : “Why would I.”

Caption (pointing at Savannah) : Savannah’s human form.

Panel 3 (top right to middle right of page (opposite of Panel 1 and 2))
Side by side comparision of Alison (as Windwaker) and Alison (Wedding dress) standing back/back.
(arms crossed, tough looking look)
Ester (off panel/SD face (cocky expression)) : “Changing your motif now?”
“Becoming the Angry Lesbian Bride or something?”

Alison (off panel/SD face (no emotion)) : “Going overboard, are we.”

Panel 4 (long panel, bottom half of page)
Dramatic visual of Alison (wedding dress) flying through huge stained glass window of church, punching costumed villain from start of story through it.
Alison (sd face/same no emotion expression) : “It’s not what you think.”

Amber (sd face) : “Are you talking about what I think you’re talking about.”

Different Unlike Us
“The Wedding Dress Caper”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2007 David Rasmussen

Page 3 (Page 3 of 4)
Panel 1
View looking over Alison’s shoulder (Ester/Savannah sitting in front of her) (Savannah eating as she looks over) as Amber (standing next to Ester) looks over at Alison (serious expression) (Amber is wearing street clothes too)
Alison : “Wasn’t my fault.”

Amber : “One favor and you end up getting into a fight with a tight wearing weirdo.”

Panel 2
Closer view of Ester/Savannah gazes turning towards the table top (Savannah still stuffing her mouth as she looks on) as a magazine flops in front of them (Amber tosses it down).
Amber (off panel) : “Here, check it out.”

Ester : “Is it dirty?”
“(Show this to Rika, not me.)”

Panel 3
Cover image. Alison in wedding dress posing (cover), showing off her powers (benchpressing row of a half a dozen bridesmaids over her head).
Cover Title : SUPER BRIDAL MONTHLY
Sub Title : WEDDING DRESSES BUILT FOR THE MODERN SUPER BRIDE.

Panel 4
Amber (skooshing into booth next to Ester) as she looks at Amber (flustered) (Savannah still eating, moving over)
Ester : “Hey! Why didn’t you tell me about this?!?”

Amber : “Look inside before you cry foul.”
“(And you can’t bench press half a dozen bridesmaids so cut it out.)”

Panel 5
Close up of Ester (chewing food while flipping through the magazine in an irritated mood)
Ester : “More to life than pumped up muscles and tits, you know.”

Alison (off panel) : “Hey!”

Amber (off panel) : “Page 97.”
“(And be nice.)”

Different Unlike Us
“The Wedding Dress Caper”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2007 David Rasmussen

Page 4 (Page 4 of 4)
Panel 1
Page spread (two page spread) of Alison (wedding dress)/male super hero (in tuxedo) posing like bride and groom. Bridesmaids in background (wedding photo shoot)
Ester (off panel) : “?!?”

Panel 2
Alison (eating) (looking pissed off as she eats) (view from Ester/Amber’s POV looking at Alison) (magazine held up as if showing Alison the two page spread (not visible to readers)).
Ester : “LOOK AT YOU!!”
“You so straight here it’s almost sickening!”

Alison : “AMBER!!”

Amber : “Don’t blame me.”
“(You didn’t mind the extra cash for being in the shoot.)”

Panel 3 (two panel spread (before and after))
Left side of page, Alison in wedding dress (before)
Amber (off panel/SD face - serious expression) : “Speaking of blame…”
“Where is that dress?”

Alison (off panel/SD face - recovering from being angry, trying to get back to being emotionless) :
“Back to the drawing board, Amber.”
“Not fireproof.”

Panel 4 (two panel spread (before and after))
Right side of page, Alison in tatters of wedding dress standing in middle of street (in the blast remains of a huge explosion that took out villain). (She’s wearing her unstable molecule panties/bra underneath dress so she’s not naked).
Amber (off panel/SD face - facefaulted) : “Not… fire… proof…”

Alison (off panel/SD face - blank expression) : “Maybe not blast proof.”
“It kinda burned though so it’s not fireproof either.”

Panel 5
Bottom panel. Rika (home) taking wedding dress Alison wore (perfectly intact, undamaged) out of box looking rather confused.
Caption (pointing at card in Rika’s hand) : “For our wedding day. Alison”
“P.S. : Guess what I want you wearing tonight!”

Panel 6
Black panel (text only)
Amber (off panel) : “No, really, where is it.”
Alison (off panel) : “Burned. To. Ashes.”
Amber (off panel) : “Ali…”
Caption : “See you next time!”