Thursday, June 21, 2007
"Then Came Savannah" has an Artist
Gerardo Gonzalez is going to tackle the artistic duties for "Then Came Savannah" (the second batch of 4 pagers presently in production right now).
Wednesday, June 20, 2007
Different Unlike Us : Then Came Savannah
Different Unlike Us
“And Then Came Savannah”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2007 David Rasmussen
Page 22
Panel 1
View from over Alison’s shoulder (Alison’s head visible in panel) looking at Savannah (as she grips her tail with one hand while she flips the table back over setting it up with the other)
Savannah : “Sorry.”
“You stepped on my tail though.”
“Should have tucked it in though.”
Alison : “…”Giant Zebra Women“… eh…”
Panel 2
SD Ester riding on top of Savannah’s shoulders (in costume but not wearing her mask) looking smug, Savannah is looking rather confused as she tries to turn her head to look at Ester.
Ester : “Yup!”
“It’s a flashback story!”
Savannah : “What are you doing…”
Panel 3
Alison (standing next to the couch) stares at Savannah (now sat down for “questioning”) as she wiggles and looks rather hyper while trying to sit calmly on the couch (all jumpy).
Alison : “What are you doing in here?”
“Heard of the word “trespassing” before?”
Savannah : “I heard you’re the one to talk to if I wanted to join...”
Panel 4
Same as last panel, Savannah now looking up looking rather anxious as Alison stares at her (uncomfortable moment).
Alison : “…join…”
“(come on now, finish the sentence)”
Panel 5
Same as last panel, Savannah grabs Alison dragging her onto the couch (landing her face down on her lap awkwardly as if she’s going to spank her)
Panel 6
Savannah (on couch) with Alison in her lap (face down). Savannah is staring up Alison’s cape (down at her rear end) as Alison lies there looking most uncomfortable.
Savannah : “You have visible panty lines.”
“…hmm…”
“…powder pink…”
Alison : “…”
Different Unlike Us
“And Then Came Savannah”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2007 David Rasmussen
Page 23
Panel 1
Same view of couch from last page (Savannah with Alison in her lap face down) as Savannah stares now at Alison (no longer lifting Alison‘s cape or staring at her rear).
Alison : “So, are you going to finish the sentence, or spank me.”
“One or the other please.”
Savannah : “Oh.”
Panel 2
Slightly altered view of last panel (Savannah now spanking Alison so use a dramatic view).
Savannah looks rather confused as Alison protests.
Sound F/X : (spanking noises)
Alison : “WHAT THE (OW) HELL ARE (OW) YOU DOING!!”
“OW OW OW!!”
Savannah : “But you said to spank you…”
Alison : “IDIOT!!”
Panel 3
Small panel (Rika coming through the front door)
Rika : “I’m home, Ali…”
Panel 4
POV over Rika’s shoulder (Rika’s head in panel) staring in disbelief at Savannah spanking Alison on couch (Savannah looks rather sheepish)
Savannah : “I think she wants you to spank her now.”
Alison : “RIKA? (OW!) IS THAT (OW!) YOU??”
“FOR GOD’S SA-- OUCH!! JUST SA-- OUCH!! SA--”
“KILL HER!!”
Rika : “Uh… no.”
Panel 5
Small panel (Rika/Alison standing side by side, Rika pushing down Alison’s hands and the chains she has gripped in her hands)
Rika : “No dumping the confused zebra girl into the river.”
Different Unlike Us
“Then Came Savannah”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2006, 2007 David Rasmussen
Page 24
Panel 1
Change of view. From Alison’s POV looking across the couch at Lita (hugging Savannah as Lina and Lila looks on from behind the couch. (Rika is off panel)
Lita : “So you totally met my new lover, right?“
“She’s going to be perfect in our team!“
Alison : “…our team…?”
Panel 2
Alison (looking peeved) as Rika tries to distract her (holding her, trying to whisper to her as she stands there and looks peeved)
Lita (off panel) : “And since she‘s my gal I figured “Hey! She‘ll be great in our team!” and all!”
“So I sent her here to introduce herself.”
Alison : “You. Did. What.”
Panel 3
Lita cuddled close to Savannah (both look rather happy as Lita has one hand under Savannah’s face nudging it up to stare her right in the eyes)
Lita : “So did she welcome you properly into the team, m’love?“
Savannah : “Well, about that...”
“Maybe I should show you.”
Panel 4
Dramatic view of couch area as Savannah spanks Lita (with everyone else behind the couch watching the scene with great interest)
Lita : “ARE YOU SURE…“
Alison : “Oh, yeah. She did that. Yeah.“
Panel 5
Closing panel. Alison is holding SD Ester up in the air (by her collar) looking rather peeved at her (Ester looks smug) as Lita/Savannah kiss passionately in the foreground. (head/shoulders view).
SD Ester : “What are you pissed about!!”
“You red cheeked baboon!”
Alison : “….”
Lita : “Spank me again soon...”
Caption : Fin
“And Then Came Savannah”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2007 David Rasmussen
Page 22
Panel 1
View from over Alison’s shoulder (Alison’s head visible in panel) looking at Savannah (as she grips her tail with one hand while she flips the table back over setting it up with the other)
Savannah : “Sorry.”
“You stepped on my tail though.”
“Should have tucked it in though.”
Alison : “…”Giant Zebra Women“… eh…”
Panel 2
SD Ester riding on top of Savannah’s shoulders (in costume but not wearing her mask) looking smug, Savannah is looking rather confused as she tries to turn her head to look at Ester.
Ester : “Yup!”
“It’s a flashback story!”
Savannah : “What are you doing…”
Panel 3
Alison (standing next to the couch) stares at Savannah (now sat down for “questioning”) as she wiggles and looks rather hyper while trying to sit calmly on the couch (all jumpy).
Alison : “What are you doing in here?”
“Heard of the word “trespassing” before?”
Savannah : “I heard you’re the one to talk to if I wanted to join...”
Panel 4
Same as last panel, Savannah now looking up looking rather anxious as Alison stares at her (uncomfortable moment).
Alison : “…join…”
“(come on now, finish the sentence)”
Panel 5
Same as last panel, Savannah grabs Alison dragging her onto the couch (landing her face down on her lap awkwardly as if she’s going to spank her)
Panel 6
Savannah (on couch) with Alison in her lap (face down). Savannah is staring up Alison’s cape (down at her rear end) as Alison lies there looking most uncomfortable.
Savannah : “You have visible panty lines.”
“…hmm…”
“…powder pink…”
Alison : “…”
Different Unlike Us
“And Then Came Savannah”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2007 David Rasmussen
Page 23
Panel 1
Same view of couch from last page (Savannah with Alison in her lap face down) as Savannah stares now at Alison (no longer lifting Alison‘s cape or staring at her rear).
Alison : “So, are you going to finish the sentence, or spank me.”
“One or the other please.”
Savannah : “Oh.”
Panel 2
Slightly altered view of last panel (Savannah now spanking Alison so use a dramatic view).
Savannah looks rather confused as Alison protests.
Sound F/X : (spanking noises)
Alison : “WHAT THE (OW) HELL ARE (OW) YOU DOING!!”
“OW OW OW!!”
Savannah : “But you said to spank you…”
Alison : “IDIOT!!”
Panel 3
Small panel (Rika coming through the front door)
Rika : “I’m home, Ali…”
Panel 4
POV over Rika’s shoulder (Rika’s head in panel) staring in disbelief at Savannah spanking Alison on couch (Savannah looks rather sheepish)
Savannah : “I think she wants you to spank her now.”
Alison : “RIKA? (OW!) IS THAT (OW!) YOU??”
“FOR GOD’S SA-- OUCH!! JUST SA-- OUCH!! SA--”
“KILL HER!!”
Rika : “Uh… no.”
Panel 5
Small panel (Rika/Alison standing side by side, Rika pushing down Alison’s hands and the chains she has gripped in her hands)
Rika : “No dumping the confused zebra girl into the river.”
Different Unlike Us
“Then Came Savannah”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2006, 2007 David Rasmussen
Page 24
Panel 1
Change of view. From Alison’s POV looking across the couch at Lita (hugging Savannah as Lina and Lila looks on from behind the couch. (Rika is off panel)
Lita : “So you totally met my new lover, right?“
“She’s going to be perfect in our team!“
Alison : “…our team…?”
Panel 2
Alison (looking peeved) as Rika tries to distract her (holding her, trying to whisper to her as she stands there and looks peeved)
Lita (off panel) : “And since she‘s my gal I figured “Hey! She‘ll be great in our team!” and all!”
“So I sent her here to introduce herself.”
Alison : “You. Did. What.”
Panel 3
Lita cuddled close to Savannah (both look rather happy as Lita has one hand under Savannah’s face nudging it up to stare her right in the eyes)
Lita : “So did she welcome you properly into the team, m’love?“
Savannah : “Well, about that...”
“Maybe I should show you.”
Panel 4
Dramatic view of couch area as Savannah spanks Lita (with everyone else behind the couch watching the scene with great interest)
Lita : “ARE YOU SURE…“
Alison : “Oh, yeah. She did that. Yeah.“
Panel 5
Closing panel. Alison is holding SD Ester up in the air (by her collar) looking rather peeved at her (Ester looks smug) as Lita/Savannah kiss passionately in the foreground. (head/shoulders view).
SD Ester : “What are you pissed about!!”
“You red cheeked baboon!”
Alison : “….”
Lita : “Spank me again soon...”
Caption : Fin
Different Unlike Us new projects (two parter)
This is a two parter project for two artists.
The only pre-requisite is that we need both Artists who take this one to coordinate with each other on it since where one Artist leaves off the other will pick up from.
Different Unlike Us
“The Wearing Out of the Green”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2006 David Rasmussen
Page 5
Panel 1
Huge panel. Newspaper front page (large front page image/headline) as somebody (Solo/Lila) is reading the paper (see hand only holding the paper up).
Image is that of Vigilance & Solo fighting faceless masked evil people (Artist choice for random characters).
Headline : “BUSTED!”
Caption (Ester‘s SD head/thoughtful expression) : “Well, that went rather well.”
Caption (Solo/Lita SD head/emotionless face) : “Uh-huh.”
Caption (Ester’s SD head/thoughtful expression) : “And we got everything done in an orderly manner.”
Caption (Solo/Lita SD head/emotionless face) : “Uh-huh.”
Panel 2
Thin panel bridging between the top panel (1) and the lower panel (3). Newspaper lowers as you see waist view of Ester/Vigilance and Lila/Solo (Lila lowering the paper as Ester stands near her) (Lita and Lina are off panel).
Ester : “So tell me something…”
Panel 3
Long panel (bottom) of foursome (POV looking straight at them as if camera was set up a few feet in front of them), with Lita/Ester/Lila & Lina from left to right, looking up (at a system board that is out of sight). They’re standing on a train platform (silent ane empty). (they’re dressed in their civilian clothes with Ester lugging a backpack (her gear in stashed away in a hidden pouch in the backpack)).
Ester : “How did we miss the last train again?”
Lita (emotionless face) : “It’s your fault for never learning how to drive.”
Lila (munching on a pocky stick/forlorned look) : “I can‘t read in this poor lighting.”
Lina (chewing on gum/bored) : “I need to plug in my PSP again.”
Different Unlike Us
“The Wearing Out of the Green”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2006 David Rasmussen
Page 6
Panel 1
Small panel (top left of page) showing a set of boots/shoes (boots belonging to Vigilance/Solo) and shoes (Alison/Rika’s apartment) set near front door.
Alison (off panel) : “…why me…”
Ester (off panel) : “Because you live in the neighborhood.”
Panel 2 (next to panel 1)
Ester (leaning against fridge with carton of milk in hand (drinking out of carton))
Ester : “And today is a beautiful day to be a neigh--”
“….”
“…2%. Bleah.”
Panel 3 (long panel / middle of page)
Alison (standing in the center of the living room area (couch, long table and TV (where readers are since one of the trio that is Solo is watching readers/TV)), background showing kitchette with long counters and small table for eating set in front of kitchette as she watches her “house guests” mill about her, she’s in a huff (eyes narrowed and fists clenched).
Lita (red hair) is watching TV (sitting on the couch staring at readers), while Lila is walking past Alicia with a quilt under one arm and a desk light (unplugged) in the other.
Ester : “Anyway you know I’d do it for you if you were in this predictiment.”
Alison : “Why the hell would I be…”
“…I can just fly home, speaking of which --”
Ester : “Amber’s out of town and you know it.”
Panel 4 (lower left side of page)
Slanted view (as if camera began to pan towards one side while keeping an eye on the couch) as Ester jumps onto the couch (spilling milk as she does)
Ester : “Anything good on… oops, milk.”
Alison (off panel) : “Wait a minute.”
Lita (red) : “Wanna check the pay-per-view porn channels?”
Alison (off panel) : “HEY!!”
Panel 5 (lower right side of page)
View from bathroom looking into living room as Lina (towel wrapped around her) dodges off panel into the open bathroom door as Alicia (background) turns towards readers (Lina) frustrated.
Lina : “I got dibs on the bath!”
Alison : “WAIT A MINUTE!! HEY!!”
Different Unlike Us
“The Wearing Out of the Green”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2006 David Rasmussen
Page 7
Panel 1
Close up of Alison (fuming mad) as something green (glow) is shoved into the panel.
Ester : “DOWN ALIEN SPAWN!”
Panel 2
Alison/Ester (super deformed, standing on top of the couch holding a green sphere at Alison who is looking at her oddly) (the sphere glows menancingly).
Alison : “…what are you doing…”
Ester : “Cursed from the death of her homeworld…”
Panel 3
Side view of Alison/Ester (SD) staring each other down. Alison stands there looking bored as Ester continues to wave the green sphere at her (glowing menancingly).
Ester : “…this last reminant of Ali’s dead motherland acts like POISON to her INHUMAN SOUL!!”
Alison : “I was born in Hawaii, you --”
Panel 4
Same as last panel (Ester now waving the sphere at Alison dramatically)
Ester : “FEEL FREE TO CRUMBLE IN PAIN ANYTIME!!“
“PLANET HAWAII DAMNS YOU!!”
Alison : “….”
Panel 5
Black panel (lower right hand of page) (text only)
Alison (off panel) : “What is it that Amber finds attractive in you again.”
“I find her attraction to you highly suspect.”
Different Unlike Us
“The Wearing Out of the Green”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2006 David Rasmussen
Page 8
Panel 1
Long panel (top of page), Alison (now SD) walking away from Ester (standing on couch).
Background is a “fantasy” sequence with Amber (super deformed) in bed with some hot female generic Green Lantern type woman.
Alison : “Whatever. She’s probably already found someone to replace you anyway.”
Amber : “I’ll dump her when I go back to Earth.”
Ester : “-_-”
Panel 2
Same as last panel (middle of page) with Ester (SD) hurling the green sphere (knocking Alison out with one shot)
Sound FX : WHACK!!
Panel 3
Lower left of page. Ester (SD) poses dramatically at the readers with a wicked look on her face.
Ester : “SEE?!? SEE HOW SHE HAS SUCCUMBED TO THE ALIEN SPACE ROCK!!”
“IT’S SAPPING HER OF THE WILL TO LIVE!!”
Panel 4
Alison (on ground, foreground in shadows for the most part except her glowing eyes) waking up (her eyes glowing red as they open), and Ester (disappearing as she leaps back onto the couch oblivious to Alison.
Alison : “…..”
Ester : “Well, whatever, pass the popcorn.”
Caption : Fin
Different Unlike Us
“Strange Living Room Fellows”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2006, 2007 David Rasmussen
Page 9
Panel 1
Close up of front door as Rika enters (dressed in her reporter clothes), looking rather tired as she pulls the door open coming in.
Rika : “Ali? I’m home…”
Panel 2
Rika (standing next to the huge dining table covered in a giant blanket as a tent, light shining within the “tent” as she stares at it oddly).
Lila (under table) : “Everyone was bothering me when I was trying to read.”
Rika : “Uh… sorry?”
Panel 3
Lina (naked in shower, soap suds providing any censorship needs) as she jumps in shock.
Lina : “Eeekk!!”
Panel 4
View from over Rika’s shoulder (Rika’s head visible in panel) looking through the open bathroom door into the shower.
Rika : “Lock doors much?”
Lina : “I was hoping Lita or Lila were going to join me.”
“Wanna join me? I got lots of suds here.”
Rika : “No.”
Panel 5
Long panel (bottom). Rika (standing next to the couch) stares at it’s three “inhabitants” as they stare listlessly at the readers (TV). Ester and Lita are sitting comfortably, but Alison is crumpled on one side of the couch exhausted.
Rika : “Tough day babysitting?”
Alison : “Gimme a break.”Different Unlike Us
“Strange Living Room Fellows”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2006, 2007 David Rasmussen
Page 10
Panel 1
Same view of couch (Page 1, Panel 5) as Lita (middle of couch) holds back both Alison/Ester, mostly Alison who looks like she wants to strangle Ester. (All three panels are basically the same viewpoint as the scene changes).
Lita : “Not now, kiddies, mommy’s watching Are You Smarter Than A Fifth Grader…”
“Ironic since you two are totally acting like kids right now.”
Ester : “Tell that scrooge over there to be nicer to us!”
Panel 2
Same view of couch from last panel as Lina walks past the back of the couch (wrapped in towels), as Rika sits down (next to Alison/between her and Ester/Lita) as Ester looks over at her frowning.
(Alison looks up to join Lita in watching TV).
Alison : “Being pissy is boring…”
“I knew that. 3rd Grade Astronomy is so easy.”
Lina : “I’m going to help myself to your food now, tell me when he flunks out.”
Panel 3
Same view of couch from last panel as Rika turns towards the right of panel (Alison’s side of couch) looking off towards where Lita is as she joins them (walking into panel).
Lita : “I like this show.”
“(Why did it vanish off the schedule for so long back in May?)”
Ester : “We’d totally let her crash at our place if she ever missed the last train.”
Alison : “What part of “I can fly” goes over that empty head of yours.”
Different Unlike Us
“Strange Living Room Fellows”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2006, 2007 David Rasmussen
Page 11
Panel 1
Change of view. From Alison’s POV looking across the couch at Rika (front), Lita and Ester.
Rika is holding the green sphere (looking at it) while Ester points at it with a dramatic shocked look on her face.
Rika : “By the way, I found this on the floor over there.”
Ester : “HAWAII-ITE!”
Panel 2
Same as last panel (Rika looking over at Ester, who is writhing in “agony” as Lita continues to watch TV “quietly”).
Rika : “….”
Ester : “HAWAII… draining… strength… PAIN PAIN!!”
Panel 3
Same as last panel (Rika leans back into couch holding sphere on her lap as Ester falls off couch, Lita continues to sit and watch TV quietly)
Ester : “MUST SHIELD… HAWAII IN… CRÈME BRULLE!!”
Rika : “Stop cursing my paperweight.”
Panel 4
Same as last panel (Rika bats away Alison’s hand as she tries to take the sphere), Lita continues to watch TV quietly.
Ester : “By the way I love your thick strap on that you keep on your desk. For Ali, right?”
Rika : “Don’t kill her, please, blood is hard to wash out of the carpet.”
Panel 5
Long panel (bottom of page) with everyone decked out on the floor in sleeping bags.
Lita is still awake (reading using the light she “borrowed” earlier), while Alison/Rika talk (sleeping in a giant sleeping bag).
Alison : “What part of her is supposed to be “Batman-like” again?”
Rika : “Behave.”
Lita : “Bedtime sucks.”Different Unlike Us
“Strange Living Room Fellows”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2006, 2007 David Rasmussen
Page 12
Panel 1
Amber (in her Super uniform) standing near the kitchenette (Amber/Ester) staring at something off panel looking rather confused, one eye raised in Spock-ish manner.
Amber : “What’s going on here.”
Panel 2
Everyone (Alison/Rika/Ester and Lita/Lila & Lina) sitting at the large table in the living area, all exhausted and tired while trying to eat breakfast (haphazardly).
Rika : “Alison couldn’t take Ester’s bored rantings at 2AM and flew her home.”
Panel 3
View of the “roundtable” of six sitting around the table as Amber sits down in front of them.
Lita : “I missed Ester.”
Lila : “I missed Lita.”
Lina : “I missed Lila.”
Rika : “I’m not sure how I got here…”
Panel 4
Ester/Amber as Ester scoots over to Amber, collapsing into her crying.
Ester : “You’re not screwing some hot female alien chick behind my back are you?”
Amber : “….”
“Where did that come from?”
Panel 5
Bottom panel (long), as Ester waves a bright glowing green thing (bright green sphere of light obscuring what’s in her hand) as everyone eats quietly ignoring her, except Amber who looks rather confused by all this.
Ester : “The Power of Sex Compels You!!”
Alison : “Enough already.”
Amber : “What the hell is going on.“
Caption : Fin
The only pre-requisite is that we need both Artists who take this one to coordinate with each other on it since where one Artist leaves off the other will pick up from.
Different Unlike Us
“The Wearing Out of the Green”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2006 David Rasmussen
Page 5
Panel 1
Huge panel. Newspaper front page (large front page image/headline) as somebody (Solo/Lila) is reading the paper (see hand only holding the paper up).
Image is that of Vigilance & Solo fighting faceless masked evil people (Artist choice for random characters).
Headline : “BUSTED!”
Caption (Ester‘s SD head/thoughtful expression) : “Well, that went rather well.”
Caption (Solo/Lita SD head/emotionless face) : “Uh-huh.”
Caption (Ester’s SD head/thoughtful expression) : “And we got everything done in an orderly manner.”
Caption (Solo/Lita SD head/emotionless face) : “Uh-huh.”
Panel 2
Thin panel bridging between the top panel (1) and the lower panel (3). Newspaper lowers as you see waist view of Ester/Vigilance and Lila/Solo (Lila lowering the paper as Ester stands near her) (Lita and Lina are off panel).
Ester : “So tell me something…”
Panel 3
Long panel (bottom) of foursome (POV looking straight at them as if camera was set up a few feet in front of them), with Lita/Ester/Lila & Lina from left to right, looking up (at a system board that is out of sight). They’re standing on a train platform (silent ane empty). (they’re dressed in their civilian clothes with Ester lugging a backpack (her gear in stashed away in a hidden pouch in the backpack)).
Ester : “How did we miss the last train again?”
Lita (emotionless face) : “It’s your fault for never learning how to drive.”
Lila (munching on a pocky stick/forlorned look) : “I can‘t read in this poor lighting.”
Lina (chewing on gum/bored) : “I need to plug in my PSP again.”
Different Unlike Us
“The Wearing Out of the Green”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2006 David Rasmussen
Page 6
Panel 1
Small panel (top left of page) showing a set of boots/shoes (boots belonging to Vigilance/Solo) and shoes (Alison/Rika’s apartment) set near front door.
Alison (off panel) : “…why me…”
Ester (off panel) : “Because you live in the neighborhood.”
Panel 2 (next to panel 1)
Ester (leaning against fridge with carton of milk in hand (drinking out of carton))
Ester : “And today is a beautiful day to be a neigh--”
“….”
“…2%. Bleah.”
Panel 3 (long panel / middle of page)
Alison (standing in the center of the living room area (couch, long table and TV (where readers are since one of the trio that is Solo is watching readers/TV)), background showing kitchette with long counters and small table for eating set in front of kitchette as she watches her “house guests” mill about her, she’s in a huff (eyes narrowed and fists clenched).
Lita (red hair) is watching TV (sitting on the couch staring at readers), while Lila is walking past Alicia with a quilt under one arm and a desk light (unplugged) in the other.
Ester : “Anyway you know I’d do it for you if you were in this predictiment.”
Alison : “Why the hell would I be…”
“…I can just fly home, speaking of which --”
Ester : “Amber’s out of town and you know it.”
Panel 4 (lower left side of page)
Slanted view (as if camera began to pan towards one side while keeping an eye on the couch) as Ester jumps onto the couch (spilling milk as she does)
Ester : “Anything good on… oops, milk.”
Alison (off panel) : “Wait a minute.”
Lita (red) : “Wanna check the pay-per-view porn channels?”
Alison (off panel) : “HEY!!”
Panel 5 (lower right side of page)
View from bathroom looking into living room as Lina (towel wrapped around her) dodges off panel into the open bathroom door as Alicia (background) turns towards readers (Lina) frustrated.
Lina : “I got dibs on the bath!”
Alison : “WAIT A MINUTE!! HEY!!”
Different Unlike Us
“The Wearing Out of the Green”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2006 David Rasmussen
Page 7
Panel 1
Close up of Alison (fuming mad) as something green (glow) is shoved into the panel.
Ester : “DOWN ALIEN SPAWN!”
Panel 2
Alison/Ester (super deformed, standing on top of the couch holding a green sphere at Alison who is looking at her oddly) (the sphere glows menancingly).
Alison : “…what are you doing…”
Ester : “Cursed from the death of her homeworld…”
Panel 3
Side view of Alison/Ester (SD) staring each other down. Alison stands there looking bored as Ester continues to wave the green sphere at her (glowing menancingly).
Ester : “…this last reminant of Ali’s dead motherland acts like POISON to her INHUMAN SOUL!!”
Alison : “I was born in Hawaii, you --”
Panel 4
Same as last panel (Ester now waving the sphere at Alison dramatically)
Ester : “FEEL FREE TO CRUMBLE IN PAIN ANYTIME!!“
“PLANET HAWAII DAMNS YOU!!”
Alison : “….”
Panel 5
Black panel (lower right hand of page) (text only)
Alison (off panel) : “What is it that Amber finds attractive in you again.”
“I find her attraction to you highly suspect.”
Different Unlike Us
“The Wearing Out of the Green”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2006 David Rasmussen
Page 8
Panel 1
Long panel (top of page), Alison (now SD) walking away from Ester (standing on couch).
Background is a “fantasy” sequence with Amber (super deformed) in bed with some hot female generic Green Lantern type woman.
Alison : “Whatever. She’s probably already found someone to replace you anyway.”
Amber : “I’ll dump her when I go back to Earth.”
Ester : “-_-”
Panel 2
Same as last panel (middle of page) with Ester (SD) hurling the green sphere (knocking Alison out with one shot)
Sound FX : WHACK!!
Panel 3
Lower left of page. Ester (SD) poses dramatically at the readers with a wicked look on her face.
Ester : “SEE?!? SEE HOW SHE HAS SUCCUMBED TO THE ALIEN SPACE ROCK!!”
“IT’S SAPPING HER OF THE WILL TO LIVE!!”
Panel 4
Alison (on ground, foreground in shadows for the most part except her glowing eyes) waking up (her eyes glowing red as they open), and Ester (disappearing as she leaps back onto the couch oblivious to Alison.
Alison : “…..”
Ester : “Well, whatever, pass the popcorn.”
Caption : Fin
Different Unlike Us
“Strange Living Room Fellows”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2006, 2007 David Rasmussen
Page 9
Panel 1
Close up of front door as Rika enters (dressed in her reporter clothes), looking rather tired as she pulls the door open coming in.
Rika : “Ali? I’m home…”
Panel 2
Rika (standing next to the huge dining table covered in a giant blanket as a tent, light shining within the “tent” as she stares at it oddly).
Lila (under table) : “Everyone was bothering me when I was trying to read.”
Rika : “Uh… sorry?”
Panel 3
Lina (naked in shower, soap suds providing any censorship needs) as she jumps in shock.
Lina : “Eeekk!!”
Panel 4
View from over Rika’s shoulder (Rika’s head visible in panel) looking through the open bathroom door into the shower.
Rika : “Lock doors much?”
Lina : “I was hoping Lita or Lila were going to join me.”
“Wanna join me? I got lots of suds here.”
Rika : “No.”
Panel 5
Long panel (bottom). Rika (standing next to the couch) stares at it’s three “inhabitants” as they stare listlessly at the readers (TV). Ester and Lita are sitting comfortably, but Alison is crumpled on one side of the couch exhausted.
Rika : “Tough day babysitting?”
Alison : “Gimme a break.”Different Unlike Us
“Strange Living Room Fellows”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2006, 2007 David Rasmussen
Page 10
Panel 1
Same view of couch (Page 1, Panel 5) as Lita (middle of couch) holds back both Alison/Ester, mostly Alison who looks like she wants to strangle Ester. (All three panels are basically the same viewpoint as the scene changes).
Lita : “Not now, kiddies, mommy’s watching Are You Smarter Than A Fifth Grader…”
“Ironic since you two are totally acting like kids right now.”
Ester : “Tell that scrooge over there to be nicer to us!”
Panel 2
Same view of couch from last panel as Lina walks past the back of the couch (wrapped in towels), as Rika sits down (next to Alison/between her and Ester/Lita) as Ester looks over at her frowning.
(Alison looks up to join Lita in watching TV).
Alison : “Being pissy is boring…”
“I knew that. 3rd Grade Astronomy is so easy.”
Lina : “I’m going to help myself to your food now, tell me when he flunks out.”
Panel 3
Same view of couch from last panel as Rika turns towards the right of panel (Alison’s side of couch) looking off towards where Lita is as she joins them (walking into panel).
Lita : “I like this show.”
“(Why did it vanish off the schedule for so long back in May?)”
Ester : “We’d totally let her crash at our place if she ever missed the last train.”
Alison : “What part of “I can fly” goes over that empty head of yours.”
Different Unlike Us
“Strange Living Room Fellows”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2006, 2007 David Rasmussen
Page 11
Panel 1
Change of view. From Alison’s POV looking across the couch at Rika (front), Lita and Ester.
Rika is holding the green sphere (looking at it) while Ester points at it with a dramatic shocked look on her face.
Rika : “By the way, I found this on the floor over there.”
Ester : “HAWAII-ITE!”
Panel 2
Same as last panel (Rika looking over at Ester, who is writhing in “agony” as Lita continues to watch TV “quietly”).
Rika : “….”
Ester : “HAWAII… draining… strength… PAIN PAIN!!”
Panel 3
Same as last panel (Rika leans back into couch holding sphere on her lap as Ester falls off couch, Lita continues to sit and watch TV quietly)
Ester : “MUST SHIELD… HAWAII IN… CRÈME BRULLE!!”
Rika : “Stop cursing my paperweight.”
Panel 4
Same as last panel (Rika bats away Alison’s hand as she tries to take the sphere), Lita continues to watch TV quietly.
Ester : “By the way I love your thick strap on that you keep on your desk. For Ali, right?”
Rika : “Don’t kill her, please, blood is hard to wash out of the carpet.”
Panel 5
Long panel (bottom of page) with everyone decked out on the floor in sleeping bags.
Lita is still awake (reading using the light she “borrowed” earlier), while Alison/Rika talk (sleeping in a giant sleeping bag).
Alison : “What part of her is supposed to be “Batman-like” again?”
Rika : “Behave.”
Lita : “Bedtime sucks.”Different Unlike Us
“Strange Living Room Fellows”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2006, 2007 David Rasmussen
Page 12
Panel 1
Amber (in her Super uniform) standing near the kitchenette (Amber/Ester) staring at something off panel looking rather confused, one eye raised in Spock-ish manner.
Amber : “What’s going on here.”
Panel 2
Everyone (Alison/Rika/Ester and Lita/Lila & Lina) sitting at the large table in the living area, all exhausted and tired while trying to eat breakfast (haphazardly).
Rika : “Alison couldn’t take Ester’s bored rantings at 2AM and flew her home.”
Panel 3
View of the “roundtable” of six sitting around the table as Amber sits down in front of them.
Lita : “I missed Ester.”
Lila : “I missed Lita.”
Lina : “I missed Lila.”
Rika : “I’m not sure how I got here…”
Panel 4
Ester/Amber as Ester scoots over to Amber, collapsing into her crying.
Ester : “You’re not screwing some hot female alien chick behind my back are you?”
Amber : “….”
“Where did that come from?”
Panel 5
Bottom panel (long), as Ester waves a bright glowing green thing (bright green sphere of light obscuring what’s in her hand) as everyone eats quietly ignoring her, except Amber who looks rather confused by all this.
Ester : “The Power of Sex Compels You!!”
Alison : “Enough already.”
Amber : “What the hell is going on.“
Caption : Fin
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