Different Unlike Us : Then Came Savannah

Different Unlike Us
“And Then Came Savannah”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2007 David Rasmussen

Page 22
Panel 1
View from over Alison’s shoulder (Alison’s head visible in panel) looking at Savannah (as she grips her tail with one hand while she flips the table back over setting it up with the other)
Savannah : “Sorry.”
“You stepped on my tail though.”
“Should have tucked it in though.”

Alison : “…”Giant Zebra Women“… eh…”

Panel 2
SD Ester riding on top of Savannah’s shoulders (in costume but not wearing her mask) looking smug, Savannah is looking rather confused as she tries to turn her head to look at Ester.
Ester : “Yup!”
“It’s a flashback story!”

Savannah : “What are you doing…”

Panel 3
Alison (standing next to the couch) stares at Savannah (now sat down for “questioning”) as she wiggles and looks rather hyper while trying to sit calmly on the couch (all jumpy).
Alison : “What are you doing in here?”
“Heard of the word “trespassing” before?”

Savannah : “I heard you’re the one to talk to if I wanted to join...”

Panel 4
Same as last panel, Savannah now looking up looking rather anxious as Alison stares at her (uncomfortable moment).
Alison : “…join…”
“(come on now, finish the sentence)”

Panel 5
Same as last panel, Savannah grabs Alison dragging her onto the couch (landing her face down on her lap awkwardly as if she’s going to spank her)

Panel 6
Savannah (on couch) with Alison in her lap (face down). Savannah is staring up Alison’s cape (down at her rear end) as Alison lies there looking most uncomfortable.
Savannah : “You have visible panty lines.”
“…hmm…”
“…powder pink…”
Alison : “…”
Different Unlike Us
“And Then Came Savannah”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2007 David Rasmussen

Page 23
Panel 1
Same view of couch from last page (Savannah with Alison in her lap face down) as Savannah stares now at Alison (no longer lifting Alison‘s cape or staring at her rear).
Alison : “So, are you going to finish the sentence, or spank me.”
“One or the other please.”

Savannah : “Oh.”

Panel 2
Slightly altered view of last panel (Savannah now spanking Alison so use a dramatic view).
Savannah looks rather confused as Alison protests.
Sound F/X : (spanking noises)
Alison : “WHAT THE (OW) HELL ARE (OW) YOU DOING!!”
“OW OW OW!!”

Savannah : “But you said to spank you…”

Alison : “IDIOT!!”

Panel 3
Small panel (Rika coming through the front door)
Rika : “I’m home, Ali…”

Panel 4
POV over Rika’s shoulder (Rika’s head in panel) staring in disbelief at Savannah spanking Alison on couch (Savannah looks rather sheepish)
Savannah : “I think she wants you to spank her now.”

Alison : “RIKA? (OW!) IS THAT (OW!) YOU??”
“FOR GOD’S SA-- OUCH!! JUST SA-- OUCH!! SA--”
“KILL HER!!”

Rika : “Uh… no.”

Panel 5
Small panel (Rika/Alison standing side by side, Rika pushing down Alison’s hands and the chains she has gripped in her hands)
Rika : “No dumping the confused zebra girl into the river.”
Different Unlike Us
“Then Came Savannah”
Writer - David Rasmussen
Copyright 2006, 2007 David Rasmussen

Page 24
Panel 1
Change of view. From Alison’s POV looking across the couch at Lita (hugging Savannah as Lina and Lila looks on from behind the couch. (Rika is off panel)
Lita : “So you totally met my new lover, right?“
“She’s going to be perfect in our team!“

Alison : “…our team…?”

Panel 2
Alison (looking peeved) as Rika tries to distract her (holding her, trying to whisper to her as she stands there and looks peeved)
Lita (off panel) : “And since she‘s my gal I figured “Hey! She‘ll be great in our team!” and all!”
“So I sent her here to introduce herself.”

Alison : “You. Did. What.”

Panel 3
Lita cuddled close to Savannah (both look rather happy as Lita has one hand under Savannah’s face nudging it up to stare her right in the eyes)
Lita : “So did she welcome you properly into the team, m’love?“

Savannah : “Well, about that...”
“Maybe I should show you.”

Panel 4
Dramatic view of couch area as Savannah spanks Lita (with everyone else behind the couch watching the scene with great interest)

Lita : “ARE YOU SURE…“

Alison : “Oh, yeah. She did that. Yeah.“

Panel 5
Closing panel. Alison is holding SD Ester up in the air (by her collar) looking rather peeved at her (Ester looks smug) as Lita/Savannah kiss passionately in the foreground. (head/shoulders view).

SD Ester : “What are you pissed about!!”
“You red cheeked baboon!”

Alison : “….”

Lita : “Spank me again soon...”

Caption : Fin